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Cold
Contributed by
yesi
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Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 03:46:54 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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This summer with you apart has made me so cold,
you were the one to break my perfect mold,
I have no feelings,
they've all been thrown away by you,
you've made me go cold,
Being away from you showed me that,
really the broken one is you,
Now I see the truth that lies,
you were nothing but a sad surprise,
Now I'm left alone,
and still I stand,
with nothing but my heart in hand.
Copyright ©
yesi
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2004-08-27 15:46:54]
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Re: Cold
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by waos on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 05:58:39 PM AEST
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| the ending stanza was definitely the best one, and yeah, i kinda know how you feel. good write. |
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Re: Cold
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 09:22:53 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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