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All The Fallen Tears
Contributed by
longforgottenlove
on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 06:29:26 PM in AEST
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No matter how much you hurt me,
All the pain you put me through,
However many times you break my heart,
I will always have a love for you.
No matter how many times you leave me,
Standing all alone,
I will always picture you,
As a king upon his throne.
No matter how many times I'm sad,
Because you are not by my side,
I will always love you,
Even though you lied.
However many times you hurt me,
And you used me so,
I wrote all my feelings down,
Just for you to know.
All the fallen tears,
And the pain you put me through,
Will always be worth it,
Just because...it's you.
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longforgottenlove
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2004-08-27 18:29:26]
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Re: All The Fallen Tears
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by alyssakoren_03 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 07:14:03 PM AEST
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| i relal yliked that write it shows how much you trully care about this person and if this mystery person does this to you he's not worth your time but it's hard to move on feeling as if no one else will treat you the same but we all feel your pain |
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Re: All The Fallen Tears
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 08:45:33 PM AEST
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| i agree with alyss. if he loved you, he wouldnt repeatedly hurt you. moving on is essential, or you are holding yourself down, and youll never reach up from the ground. |
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Re: All The Fallen Tears
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by kidpoet_213 on
Monday, 6th September 2004 @ 09:15:45 PM AEST
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I agree with the others... this is not a good situation... but this is a beautifully written piece... u do a great job with ur writing...
Don't give up!
~Donna~ |
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