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I Shall Wait
Contributed by
weepingwillow
on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 09:09:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Love is patient And so I wait
Love is caring And you are the only one
I shall wait patiently and caring until the day arrives That I bring a smile upon your face That you long to be with me and I with you Then we will spend the rest of our lives together
Time will slow to a gentle pace As we look into each others eyes Our minds will go to that special place Where our hearts abide and our dreams fly
Our hands will touch And we will wish for nothing more Than each other as our hearts rush And our love soars
Sitting side by side No need to speak Together we will be one And just the presence of the other Is all well need
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weepingwillow
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2004-08-27 21:09:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: I Shall Wait
(User Rating: 1 ) by AbnormalPunk on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 10:44:19 PM AEST (User
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hey dude this was magnificent... i totally relate... im in the same deal with a chic right now... this was an awsome poem.... keep em comin.... check some of mine out if you can and comment...
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Re: I Shall Wait
(User Rating: 1 ) by TheRaven on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:59:26 AM AEST (User
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yes, i agree, great job. written from the heart, easily touching others. i can definitely relate. awesome write thanks for sharing
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Re: I Shall Wait
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:27:10 AM AEST (User
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this is so beautiful and well written. I am living this now so it struck me deeply in my emotions. Talent, you have.
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Re: I Shall Wait
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 06:30:39 PM AEST (User
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beautiful, just so sweet:) hugs n' love nessa
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