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Crap-Shoot
Contributed by
pvd
on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 09:29:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Venus and Mars
Tom and Viv
man and woman
Ted and Sylvia
make love,
wage war
rolling together
a pair of dice
alone we die
drifting apart
a pair of ducks
on the river
of life,
black and white,
ripples
circles around
ying and yang
you and I
XX and XY
is the only
real question.
Copyright ©
pvd
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2004-08-27 21:29:23]
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Re: Crap-Shoot
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by oldernotwiser on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 04:17:40 PM AEST
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hey, ain't it the truth? and me? I get no answers. I am deeply touched and honored.
Your friend,
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Re: Crap-Shoot
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by Silent-No-More on
Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 12:43:26 AM AEST
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Contemplative but not obvious.... I like it! The pairings that you chose... and "alone we die" and "XX and XY"... brilliant.
I was here before and opted not to comment - realizing I was over tired and probably missing a lot. I am happy to have returned, more alert and therefore able to find something more here than I did at first weary glance.
Amazed that you can be so concise and so thorough at the same time,
SNM
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