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What You Wanted
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 10:42:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What You Wanted
It's a new beginning
With another chance
To bring another outcome
A failure waiting to happen
This is starting to unfold
To the new found ending
Life is what you make of it
Justification of your decision
Without regrets of what you did
Living on the edge to transcend
The ending coming at hand
Your emotions fulfill you within
But you're still so empty
Without any of your reasons
Shouldn't be in existence
Your desire to overcome
Anything at any costs
Dwindled into nothing
Your desire burning
In life's ashes of disdain
Of what you justify each day
Putting up walls against others
Locking away your emotions
Running to a resolution
The ending so unsure
Came to pass in your favor
You died without regret
Of any kind
You got what you wanted
In the end
Copyright ©
Essentially9
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2004-08-27 22:42:25]
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Re: What You Wanted
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:40:13 PM AEST
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very sad, beautifully expressed, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: What You Wanted
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by afterdark on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:45:02 PM AEST
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Very good write..I really liked this one..Heart felt
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Re: What You Wanted
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:59:57 PM AEST
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~awsome write,sometimes when i look into anothers eyes i wish i could say something like that to them...keep up the wonderful wirtes,take care
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Re: What You Wanted
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 1st October 2004 @ 09:57:12 PM AEST
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| I liked this piece. It has a lot of emotion poured into it. Great work. *S* Cynthia |
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