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Change your plans
Contributed by
MisterRight
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Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
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Lately things have been bothering you.
I can tell youve been depressed.
When it come to this, trying to comfort you,
Has really got me stressed.
You see the people around you,
Moving forward with their lives.
Some having children, starting families.
Others becoming husbands and wives.
I know these are things you desire.
I know seeing this has you upset.
But these are things Im offering you.
They can be yours if youd only accept.
I want to comfort you, but its not easy.
Because I want these things too.
And I know you and I could be on our way there,
But Im still waiting for you.
So when youre down and I hug you,
In an attempt to ease your pain,
I start to think, but this hurts me too.
And my heart begins to strain.
I want to move ahead with you,
But youve anchored yourself to the past.
I want to fulfill these desires of ours,
And I think you know wed last.
You say youre still confused.
You want to make sure you choose right.
But I know you can see this vision of mine.
Or I thought so the other night.
I asked you where you thought wed be,
If we had let this relationship, naturally advance.
You said living together, possibly engaged.
I agree, so give us the chance.
If you had given us, the chance from the start,
Engaged by now, is what wed be.
But youve weighted yourself down, with all your fears,
Just let them go and come with me.
The answer you seek will come to you,
If youd only take your foot from the breaks.
These things you want are calling for you.
Why do you still hesitate?
So sometimes its hard for me to sympathize.
Because your fear, I no longer understand.
I know you expected these things, from someone else.
But sometimes the best thing to do, is change your plans.
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2002-11-04 00:00:00]
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Re: Change your plans
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 12:40:22 AM AEST
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Hmmm... you're in a tough spot, Curtis.. I sincerly hope things fall in place for you soon. A love like yours should not be ignored. Lreat write...
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Re: Change your plans
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by LOWMAN613 on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 01:36:21 AM AEST
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| Ok ive been reading your poetry & hers & I can truly say that there is a lot of love between you two,Sometimes the BIG comitment takes time some people are afraid of it! I too wanted all those things in life but I didnt say YES to just get maried!!! It's a big step & it need time! Christina |
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Re: Change your plans
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by OreO on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 01:41:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful write curtis
Try not to let yourself get
so weighed down in your
love for someone who
drains all of who you are,
where one day you feel
nothing but
numb inside.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Change your plans
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:18:57 AM AEST
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Ahh... this girl must be nuts!! What more could she ask for?... Great Write Curtis. Hope she reads this and takes it to heart...
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Re: Change your plans
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 08:40:35 AM AEST
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Another great write .... but now I'm really curious ... she posts poems here too???
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Re: Change your plans
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 06:53:52 PM AEST
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O.K. here goes. I've been reading through your poetry tonight, because my interest was caught by a comment I read in another poem of yours. You write excellent pieces. The pain and emotion just drip off the words. This situation you're in really inspires your writing well.
So, here's a thought, just a thought. Please don't take this in a bad way, but just read my poem Sacrafice and you'll understand what I'm saying. PM me if you don't. I've been there before and sometimes it's glorious. |
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Re: Change your plans
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by ginsdance on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 09:51:05 AM AEST
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oh you guys!!! I just wish you'd get together!!! It seems so easy for me to see, but I know that it hasn't been that easy for ya'll... (and to answer another post on here for a comment... yes she posts here too)... oh... argh... I know that you will move forward soon. It seems to much of a waste to waste your whole life waiting to know the right choice, when in all reality it's a blind leap of faith.
Ginnie |
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