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Life
Contributed by
chase
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Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
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I think it's funny how life's a on way track
You think you're getting closer but you're really steppin' back
There's no turning back, but I'm always looking behind me
Hoping everything lost won't try to find me
It's funny how it's our life but we live it for them
Hoping we won't be left alone when things get dim
Nobody really knows the way, but we walk it
Nobody really knows what to say, but we talk it
Ending up in the reverie of the silent
Wondering where i am, and where my time went
How many time did I wonder where I'm going
Hoping all the hurt inside me isn't showing
I think its funny how life is up and down
One minute im free, the next my confusion has me bound
It's all for a purpose, and I'm still searching for mine
If life is like a race, then I feel like I'm behind
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chase
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2002-11-04 02:00:00]
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Re: Life
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:21:32 AM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Chase.. Great poem...(you sure it's your first??) I know the feelings well... Hope to see many more from you..
Jenni |
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Re: Life
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by OreO on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 02:41:47 AM AEST
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Now see chase i told you
it was beautiful poetry
Bravo!!! I enjoyed reading it
again, I'll be looking for more
of your work
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Life
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 08:44:36 AM AEST
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| this is really great! i really enjoyed reading this! i look forward to any future writes of yours! |
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Re: Life
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by nightrider on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 09:51:17 AM AEST
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| i really like this, and i can really relate to this. thanks for putting these emotions into such amazing words! |
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Re: Life
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Sunday, 2nd March 2003 @ 03:26:26 PM AEST
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GREAT JOB FOR YOUR FIRST POEM, IT WON'T BE LONG BEFORE YOUR A PRO.
KEEP WRITING
JEFF |
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Re: Life
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by AngryPrincess on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 12:56:58 PM AEST
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great poem :O)
Lindsey |
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Re: Life
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by JamesStockdale on
Friday, 8th February 2019 @ 03:36:56 PM AEST
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| Wonderful poem Chase! |
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