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untitled
Contributed by
Fretwell
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:44:49 AM in AEST
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I saw the greatest minds, taken by lovers.
I saw the end of mans time, just like no other.
I got frustrations beyond my years
I got relations built on flood planes
I knew one day I had to wake up.
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Fretwell
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2004-08-28 11:44:49]
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Re: untitled
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by Flipped_out on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 03:11:39 PM AEST
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Well have to be honest here this started off so well and i thought I 'got it' then.......huh?
somebody once said a poem without a title is like not naming a child....ohhhhh poor baby
unless of course your poem is actually called untitled, for which i then apologise |
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Re: untitled
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:10:22 PM AEST
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i agree with flipped. kind of scattered thoughts.
"I saw the greatest minds, taken by lovers.
I saw the end of man’s time, just like no other." that was very nice.
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Re: untitled
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by hdngfrmthelight on
Thursday, 13th January 2005 @ 08:04:19 PM AEST
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| Well, I liked it. |
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