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Famine
Contributed by
reilt
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:44:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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All the simple things
You'll never say
I just go without
A torturing wait
I hunger
For you to open your mouth
And whisper
I LOVE YOU
But you don't
Or you won't?
So I linger on
To suffer a famine of words
Yet a feast of doubt.
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reilt
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2004-08-28 11:44:57]
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Re: Famine
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by Flipped_out on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:51:02 AM AEST
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Excellent tres bien...
I know what you are saying, very poignant, well written, great style..
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Re: Famine
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 12:39:04 PM AEST
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I love the analogy used here.....Great write..
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