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For Those As Confused As I Am
Contributed by
abnormalpunk
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Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 01:55:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Tributes
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the sunless skies are blinding to eyes
the dewless mornings are passing us by
and if the immortals are going to die
why do people have to ask why
when winning the losses for the war
seem satisfying less but more
it seems to be hidden behind the opened door
what is the point of struggling for
dungeons full of roses bleeding through
coffins bursting full of life too
when never knowing what not to do
it seems all signs point up for you
why do you not reep what you sew
intentions of intending tend to grow
knowledge not knowing of what to know
the highest your lifes been at an all time low
forgetting the famous in the night
living to die to live is right
for the blind, darkness is a glorious sight
no matter what, blackness will still remain white
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abnormalpunk
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2004-08-28 13:55:13]
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Re: For Those As Confused As I Am
(User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 02:35:39 PM AEST
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The picture you paint is vivid to me
I like your style punk
Kell x |
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Re: For Those As Confused As I Am
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 05:13:24 PM AEST
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| this poem is so stereotypically "emo"... a tip for next time... be more original... this write had no umph... i was bored through the whole thing..... (sound familiar) |
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