|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Mistakes
Contributed by
all4him
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:34:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
We make so many mistakes in life
That when the time comes to make the right one
We make the wrong.
It becomes a part of us.
Like the shoes on our feet or the clothes on our back.
We try to make it up
But its not always that simple.
After so many wrongs
We begin to think
That whatever we do is wrong
and nothing will be right.
If in life your ment to make mistakes
Then why is makin to many
So wrong?
Copyright ©
all4him
... [
2004-08-28 19:34:48]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Mistakes
(User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 08:40:48 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| amazing and very true write. excellent work. |
|
|
Re: Mistakes
(User Rating: 1 )
by ESweetie711 on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:53:09 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Quite Interesting, though, mistakes are what makes a person better. but like I said, great job! |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
