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Vindicated
Contributed by
TwEeK
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 07:42:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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hypnotized by its beauty
the beauty of this dagger
feeling its sharpness against my skin
this skin
that i am never comfortable in
i feel so selfish of being on this earth
wasting air
wasting life
i can't live like this anymore
so please
just let me
slip away
slip away
take the dagger to my lips
and lick off the blood
delicious
as its coppery taste fills my mouth
i've wasted each day
each precious second
when i could have already ended it
and saved me
from this pain
there i go
being selfish again
what can i do to make you happy
can i die
slicing precisely along my arm
seeing
feeling
the blood flow on to the floor
tainted crimson white tile
my eyes glazed over
and clouded by the darkness
that soon consumed me
my body is like a fortress
unable to defend
depressions flaming arrows
and suicide
knocking on my door
so with a fatal slice
right from my jugular to my heart
i
slip away
let me slip away
with that beautiful dagger
with one stroke
i am Vindicated
by death
Copyright ©
TwEeK
... [
2004-08-28 19:42:20]
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Re: Vindicated
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by waos on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:33:46 PM AEST
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that was good, i really liked it, i thought that the way the lines were short made it flow in a cool way.
nice job
~Jekyll |
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Re: Vindicated
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by happybunnyfan on
Saturday, 4th December 2004 @ 09:32:54 PM AEST
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love it.
great write
don't care about the spelling.
your a good writer
keep it up
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Re: Vindicated
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by Dying_Angel on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:52:31 PM AEST
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| this was beautiful and i like rambling especially ramblings of such a beautiful content :)...jenxx |
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