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The Beautiful End
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:34:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The Beautiful End
Cutting and bleeding
Living without reason
Purpose nonexistent
Your life is meaningless
The beautiful end
Of this beginning
All from travesty
Couldn't transcend
Torn and not mended
From life's credence
In the last moment
You try to forget
What it is to be meant
From all of this
Scars revealed on your skin
Your eyes show no feeling
As you see within
The beautiful end
About to commence
Your last wish
Is being fulfilled
With you bleeding
Without feeling
You leave this world
For forever more
There was no reason
To live anymore
The last moment
Lived through
With purpose
For once
Copyright ©
Essentially9
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2004-08-28 22:34:18]
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Re: The Beautiful End
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:43:49 PM AEST
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| Deep dark and well done.... |
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Re: The Beautiful End
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:32:12 AM AEST
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Like a dam broken, this poem poured forth plenty of emotions, very dark and vivid.
Beautifully written.
Take Care Always
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Re: The Beautiful End
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by pixie on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:02:14 AM AEST
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this is stright from the heart, honest, very deep and filld with emotion,
pixie xx
great work... |
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Re: The Beautiful End
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:46:30 AM AEST
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very sad......... beautifully moving.......... do keep 'em coming, *wink* hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Beautiful End
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by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:07:53 PM AEST
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wow,what a dark write!but no worries it was SWEET as well,u do such a womderful job when it comes to ur poetry,which i'm very much proud of u for,keep up the incredible work...later babe!!!LOL
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Re: The Beautiful End
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by screwup on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:20:29 AM AEST
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| very well wrote... nice job |
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