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Grey
Contributed by
xRotten_Insidex
on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:48:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The days are dark and gloomy
filled with must and meloncholy
My heart is lonely and grey
Yet I have a tendancy to lock it up and never let anyone in
I cant stand the thought of being hurt again
All of the pain my heart took
It bled till it turned grey
All of those strong and deep emotions I felt for you
Have been dug out of me
Like having tweezers pull out a bullet shot deep in the flesh
These tears that trickle gently down my cheek feel cold and soothing
The thought of you wrapping your arms around me again sends me chills
How could I have been so decieved by your charm and lies
I was nothing but a big joke to you
Youve made my world turn grey.
Inside my mind it always rains
Always listening to the rain gently hittiing the ground
Its the one thing that blocks you from my mind for just a while
You have no idea of how much damage youve done to me
I will never trust another like I once have
Youve torn me apart piece by piece
ripping all my emotions away
Youve poisoned me..
I will never forgive you for everything youve takin away from me and did to me
For I will always be grey and empty
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xRotten_Insidex
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2004-08-28 22:48:39]
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Re: Grey
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by jonbalser on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:53:31 PM AEST
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| good poem i really liked it |
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Re: Grey
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 10:53:50 PM AEST
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| i can fully understand this. ive gone through it so many times in my life. yes i actually let it happen to me again. everything has a price. the price for what once was is what happens because of it. |
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Re: Grey
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:00:15 PM AEST
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| Hey, your poems rock, including this one too, way good Job, lovely writting!! okay bye!! keep writtin, your good !! |
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Re: Grey
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by mckayla on
Saturday, 28th August 2004 @ 11:07:54 PM AEST
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I am sure I have felt this too.
Great write!
mckayla |
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