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Speechless (revised)
Contributed by
stellar
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:25:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It all seems too good to be true
And yet I keep coming back to you
Well if this is wrong
How is it supposed to be
I'm caught up in what appears to be a dream
Or something of a fantasy
It's short of everything
Real and true
I move with my emotions
Now feeling for two
My whole world melts
When I steal your gaze
My heart skips a beat
That goes on for days
My head spins swiftly
As my knees turn soft and weak
You've left me utterly speechless
With so much left to speak
Copyright ©
stellar
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2004-08-29 00:25:09]
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Re: Speechless (revised)
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by emystar on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:00:00 AM AEST
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`Very good work of art as it shows jus some of the amazing power of the pen.
I'm always in awe of the power of the written word. We'll never run out of words or ways to use them, heck we can even make up our own words.
O cam certainly relate to this masterpeice in many ways.
luv, huggs, smiles, wonder?,
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Re: Speechless (revised)
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by pixie on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:59:38 AM AEST
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great write,
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Re: Speechless (revised)
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by MomentInTime on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:06:54 AM AEST
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hmmmmm reminds me that I've been there done that... you've captured it well
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Re: Speechless (revised)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:45:53 PM AEST
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Love is amazing. It can make you life so wonderful or destroy it if you let it. It is kind of one of those Catch-22 situations at times. Great writing.
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