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Emotions are dead...and so am i
Contributed by
Gothik_twitch
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:35:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Too numb to feel
Too numb to cry
Too numb to cut
Too numb to die
To sad to weep
To sad to think
To sad to *****
To sad to blink
To amgry to need
To angry to want
To angry to type
To angry to flaunt
To vicious to lie
To viousis to bleed
To vicous to beat
To visouious to be
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Re: Emotions are dead...and so am i
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:09:19 AM AEST
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Many emotions released, yet vivid, and it had a unique rythem to it.
Very Well done.
Take Care Always
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Re: Emotions are dead...and so am i
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by MomentInTime on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:17:42 AM AEST
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Interesting. This poem generates visions which you are perhaps aware of, then again may not be.
Whilst the words paint a dark picture, they are by far overshadowed by the rhythm. After a few reads, the words become blurs and lose their meanings, and the compulsion is to re-read the poem to savour the rhythm, which I would describe as primeal.
Primeal rhythm is marked by distinguishing effects and sensations.
I wonder if you see it from this angle.
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Re: Emotions are dead...and so am i
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:56:47 AM AEST
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i hope you feel better soon.
weall know this feeling. we all reach itat some point in our lives.
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