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Distant Love
Contributed by
Sophie_Taylor
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:04:50 AM in AEST
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Distant Love,
I love the way you kiss me
And the way you touch my hair
Why do we have to live so far apart?
Life is so unfair
I love you dearly, Tim
Even though were far apart
Not a day goes by
With out your love in my heart
I miss the way you look at me
With those bold blue eyes
Ever since the day I met you
I knew it would be hard to say our goodbyes
I love the way you love me
Just the way I was born
I knew I would never have to change
And we would never ever be torn
One day we will be together at last
Just me and you
All our worries will disappear
Because I know I love is true
Copyright ©
Sophie_Taylor
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2004-08-29 03:04:50]
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Re: Distant Love
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by MomentInTime on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 05:55:17 AM AEST
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I like the way you've expressed sentiments - like stating facts. At times love poems tend towards mushy, but yours doesn't.
Jordan oxo
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