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Im Getting Tired
Contributed by
SweetLittleMandi
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:10:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Im getting tired
Im getting tired of you saying things
You knew was a lie
Im getting tired of faking happy
When it really made me cry
Im getting tired of finding things
That was never found
Im getting tired of you running your mouths
And pushing me around
Im getting tired of you running to me
When you have no friends
Im getting tired of thinking its only the beginning
But its really the end
Im getting tired of you three
running my name down in the ground
Im getting tired of you faking like your listening
but you really dont hear a sound
Im getting tired of lieing to myslef
That you really cared
Im getting tired of you playing like your innocent
And looking at me with more than a stare
Im not scared of you all , you only wish i was
For one day of my life im gonna stand up to you
and say, im sick of you being here, so go away
Get out of my life and leave the rest of my family alone
You need to get your fat hinends up, get a job
and learn to live on your own
Instead of making some one else to do it for you
The next time you run that mouth i'll bust your face
The things you say is such a watse
You cant say all you want to
It aint hurting me
Its all just gonna fall back on you
And someday you'll see
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SweetLittleMandi
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2004-08-29 12:10:19]
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Re: Im Getting Tired
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 07:47:59 PM AEST
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| I like the way you started out, but you seemed to lose your rythmn somewhere around the middle. Maybe you had so many thoughts you felt it might be too long if you separated them out? Right after 'you only wish I was' is where the forward motion disappeared. Don't worry about making it too long, or getting lost in the emotion. Best of luck and I'm sure you *will* stand up to them. |
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