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Unbreakable
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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We have an unbreakable bond,
Which grows forever strong,
Love will guide us through,
You have me & I have you.
Side by side we will walk,
In unison is how our hearts talk,
Our love shines like a brand new pin,
What we have can never be a sin.
You & I will be carved in stone,
Long after the seeds have been sown,
Well live our lives as one,
Right until our time here is done.
Your soul is in sync with mine,
I can feel it right down my spine,
You cause my heart to really beat,
Bring the step back to my feet.
Inside I feel like a butterfly,
As I ascend way into the sky,
Your love is beneath my delicate wings,
Now I can feel all the wonders it brings.
What we have will never break,
Away from us nothing can ever take,
This true feeling of being in love,
Nothing do I hold higher above.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-08-29 12:54:05]
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Re: Unbreakable
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:58:46 PM AEST
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Pixie this is so beautiful...I know the feelings you convet..well I remember them at least ...one day i will write a love poem...well maybe
Thankyou for sharing
kell xxx |
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Re: Unbreakable
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by bernard on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:36:02 PM AEST
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| Pixie this is a delightful love poem. I congratulate you and your golden pen.5/5 hugs from bernard. |
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Re: Unbreakable
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 04:42:07 PM AEST
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This was very beautiful, Pixie..I loved it..and what it says......
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Unbreakable
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by Stellar on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:08:28 AM AEST
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I really like this...
You've definitely captured the feelings of true love.
Nicely done : ) |
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Re: Unbreakable
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by Rhei76 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:10:34 AM AEST
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| Beautiful |
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