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Sharp metaphors
Contributed by
Ryoko
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:56:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Needles planted on my body,
no marks can be seen,
inflicting scars on my heart,
no one knows what they mean.
Needle glares from amber eyes,
puncture my already healing wounds,
A purple swirl within the depths,
reflected surface of the moon.
Constant bluntly jabbing,
dull thick pain covers you
within the tanned shell,
my paleness becoming anew.
Short memories retract,
the end always there,
horizontal darkness shields me,
my death makes me aware.
Copyright ©
Ryoko
... [
2004-08-29 12:56:50]
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Re: Sharp metaphors
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by pixie on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 12:58:36 PM AEST
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great dark write, this was softer, but just as good,
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Re: Sharp metaphors
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 01:02:08 PM AEST
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I truly like your words..i love your style..but am a little unsure as to what you are talking about here?...let me know
otherwise cool
Kell xx
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Re: Sharp metaphors
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by Flipped_out on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:10:03 AM AEST
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Thanks for the PM...with the explanation this is so blatent now..how could I have not seen?
I feel it now...and so much clearer
thankyou...excellent!
Kell x |
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