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Weeping Rose
Contributed by
kittenfantastico
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 02:51:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Weeping Rose
Weeping rose Why do you cry As pale blue blue petals from you do glide Weeping rose why are you you blue What is it someone's done to you Like flowing tears your petals fall As you hide within your thorny wall Weeping rose crying in the rain Someday you'll be reborn and bloom again So, weeping rose shed not your tears Loved ones are here to console your fears Weeping rose please do not cry The tears you shed are both your's and mine Weeping rose please weep no more For there's nothing for you to be sorry for
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Re: Weeping Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by carmen_queasy on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:01:51 PM AEST (User
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Aw, I really liked this poem :) It flowed really well. And I liked the idea of it. |
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Re: Weeping Rose
(User Rating: 1 ) by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:28:05 AM AEST (User
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There's something nice about this poem.
I think it speaks of fragility and strength, at the same time. That's what I liked about it.
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