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The Shrieks of a Tortured Soul
Contributed by
kyletycz
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 03:47:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Why did I let you inside my life How could I let you inside my mind, my soul, my brain Now I cant make you go away
Why cant I get you out How can you get in and cause such anger, sorrow, and pain I still cant make you go away
Why are you still here Why are pictures of you still hauting, taunting, causing dismay Why wont you just go away
Why did it have to be this way You once made me feel warm, good, and gay And you still wont go away
Why did I let you inside my defenses Free to cause my mind to break down, crumble, and fray Now you will never go away Maybe thoughts of you will always stay
__________________________________________________ The first stanza of this song is from the song "Fault" by Taproot, It gave me the inspiration for this poem
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kyletycz
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2004-08-29 15:47:54] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Shrieks of a Tortured Soul
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:31:18 PM AEST (User
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I really like this. Simple, yet still stirring emtions deep within.
Well done!
~Breezy
P.S. I LOVE the title |
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