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wait for me
Contributed by
alyssakoren_03
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 06:44:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Not a minutes goes by where i don't think of you The smell of your hair, and the touch of your skin Wait for me Not a week goes by where i don't feel your presents The sound of you vioce, the gleam in your eyes Wait for me Not a month goes by where i don't yearn for you The way that you walk, how you grin when you talk Wait for me Not a dream goes by where i don't feel you your beautiful smile,the joy in your face Wait for me Not a cloud goes by where I don't see your face the hope you give me, the will to go on Wait for me Not a light goes out where i can't picture you The wisdom of your words, the song in my heart Wait for me Not a second goes by where I don't wonder where you are Your dark brown hair and dazzling eyes Wait for me Not a tear goes by where I don't ponder who you are Your pale complexion and wonderful heart Wait for me Not a tune goes by where i don't listen for you Your guitar playing, singing songs of your soul Wait for me Not a person walks by where i don't look for you The look in your eyes the same as mine Wait for me........
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Re: wait for me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:19:09 PM AEST (User
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This was deeply touching, since I've gone through the same thing. On the one hand, the head told me I was crazy, but the heart didn't care.
Old days...
Anyway, I like this, and identify as well. I hope you find what you seek.
Take care.
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Re: wait for me
(User Rating: 1 ) by savedbydeath on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:46:44 PM AEST (User
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Yo what up?what a beautiful poem full with such great emotions,i really really do like this poem,it reminds me of what i sometimes wait for.
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Re: wait for me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:23:43 PM AEST (User
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Beautifully written and so touching.... Best of luck...
(It needs a spell check tho')
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Re: wait for me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:53:56 AM AEST (User
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This is very touching where I feel the same for my boyfriend but I see him every day and night.This was a very good poem I wish he could read it. |
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