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Vampyric thoughts...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 07:02:12 PM in AEST
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Precious Night,
My dark Mother,
Bearer of a million children that light up your skies
Watching me, always watching,
As I slowly take the life out of my prey
This unbearable hunger that I have,
Churning, rupturing inside of me
My only source of living,
This magical liquid
The most beautiful shade of red,
Such an enchanting color
Beguiling, heavenly, euphoric
Like fire, this liquid that courses through my lifeless body
I am soulless
I am darkness
I am your death
Your eyes gaze into mine,
And you are under my resolute control
Look deep into my eyes,
Try to find an essence,
A heart that beats
There is nothing,
Except the incessant echo of Nothingness
Fear consumes you,
As I seize you in my iron grip
Your graceful neck is revealed,
And the monster inside surfaces
My canine teeth sink ravenously into your supple neck,
Draining the life out of your pathetic body
You are mine now,
My slave for eternity
Your life now is with the darkness,
A creature with a soul,
A monster with a conscience
Feeling the merciless stab of Guilt and Regret
I am your Hell,
Your Death and your Rebirth
Death is only the beginning....
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2004-08-29 19:02:12]
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Re: Vampyric thoughts...
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 08:55:02 PM AEST
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We r are own worse critics...I know this to well.But
I did like it to..Good read..
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Re: Vampyric thoughts...
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by katyqueen35 on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 11:48:32 PM AEST
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It's dark very dark.
but written very well.
I like it. |
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Re: Vampyric thoughts...
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 03:00:40 PM AEST
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Your words never fail to entrance me, I even caught myself, head listing just to the left, rolling back ever so slightly to accomodate your "Kiss". I am unable to combat your "resolute control". Surrender, voices whisper, echoing through the empty puppet I have become ....
Wait, where was I ... oh yes, another superb write, my dear.
Nazmythian ~ |
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