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Hopelessness
Contributed by
Essentially9
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Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 09:48:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Hopelessness
The scars visible
Weren't the most painful
The one's inside
Are what's killing me
A permanent solution
To solve the problems
Within my head
I pushed myself away
From everyone
I didn't care anymore
About what they said
This life's been useless
As it stands
It won't matter anyway
As I'm slipping away
I can't handle
The changes
And the loneliness
Only filled with hopelessness
Neglecting everything
It only causes pain
I've had enough of life already
It's nothing to live for
When you're all alone
Without any hope
Drowning in emotion
And losing blood
For all the wrong reasons
I commit myself to this
Trying to breathe
And release the pain
With the blade
But it solves nothing
For me within
Dying was even pointless
In the end
Copyright ©
Essentially9
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2004-08-29 21:48:33]
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Re: Hopelessness
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by screwup on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:01:03 PM AEST
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| I can truely relate to this poem...it was a beautiful write. |
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Re: Hopelessness
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 29th August 2004 @ 10:48:31 PM AEST
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Another very dark write,byt also a very well written poem..You are a very good writer...Keep it up..
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Re: Hopelessness
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:23:17 AM AEST
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aww Essentially9
i am sorry you feel this way.
hugs
take care |
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Re: Hopelessness
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by AnastasiaN on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:04:54 AM AEST
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| this was a really good poem, i always am touched by poems that speak my own pain too and i can fully relate. pain sucks, and i hope you can find a positive solution and maybe i can too... |
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Re: Hopelessness
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by cheech on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:42:14 PM AEST
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aww J i'm sorry u feel this way,i hope 1 day u can get over the ways u feel now,u have so much to be happy for and so much more to live for,ur only young more better days r to come ur way and everybody else's way,this was an awsome write,full with powerful feeling and emotions that makes one cry...take care luv ya
ur budy
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