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True Love's Brilliance
Contributed by
Gentledove
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 01:59:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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True love is like a diamond, it's strength is unsurpassed,
When trials come along, true love, the test will pass.
True love is like a diamond, with facets of clarity,
Even when the sun doesn't shine, it sparkles brilliantly.
True love is like a diamond, it's precious and so dear,
Great value is placed upon it, so treasure it and hold it near.
True love is lke a diamond, it's free from any taint,
It can't be weakened or polluted from that which vitiates.
True love is like a diamond, it withstands the pressures of Earth,
Instead of melting or crumbling, it's durability is unearthed.
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Vitiates; that which contaminates or invalidates.
Copyright ©
Gentledove
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2004-08-30 01:59:25]
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Re: True Love's Brilliance
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by Gabriel on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:06:21 AM AEST
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| i love the ideas behind this poem and the comparison between the strength of a diamond and the strength of true love...the only thing i might change is instead of telling the reader how strong and coveted the diamond is, i might try to show the reader with some kind of imagery...i find it more interesting to imply things with images rather than state things like prose...but this was truly one of the best reads i have had in a while |
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Re: True Love's Brilliance
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by Thunderwolf on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 02:24:10 AM AEST
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Keep up the great work babe. I love this write. I treasure our love and will always keep it near.
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Re: True Love's Brilliance
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by Bruce on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:30:08 AM AEST
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| brilliant just like the diamond |
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Re: True Love's Brilliance
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:56:28 AM AEST
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You and Richard are so lucky to have your love and devotion. Every word written here is a diamond and I wish we could all possess that kind of love. Bless you both.
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Re: True Love's Brilliance
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:06:51 PM AEST
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Yipeeeeeeeeeeeyou're back!!!! GentleDove with a heart of love.......and rightly so.........I just think this poem shined just like a brilliant diamond, I loved the "pressures: of the earth!" We all feel them, and with them much woe!
This was splendid......welcome back
Diamonds of Love to you again and again!
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Re: True Love's Brilliance
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by critterhideaway on
Friday, 3rd September 2004 @ 06:40:30 AM AEST
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Well said and so true, Thank you for this
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