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Ending it all
Contributed by
KraZshyt
on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 03:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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she was outgoing
she loved music
she loved him
it was to hard to watch it all fall
her relationship perfect except for him
he broke it all
she loved him still
he realized he also loved her still
summer days and sexy nights
phone calls hours long
touching him
looking at each other
school starts
he changes
she stays the same
she loves him still
he loves himself
she watches with tears in her eyes as his popularity grows
he leaves her behind
far behind
he teases her
calls her ugly when he used to call her beautiful
calls her stupid when he used to call her smart
she takes it
she still loves him
one day though she cant take it anymore
she goes and takes 40 sleeping pills
she lays down and prays to god to save her soul
her parents found her the next day
she had succeeded
she ended it all
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KraZshyt
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2002-11-04 15:30:00]
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Re: Ending it all
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by OreO on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 03:34:38 PM AEST
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This is so sad
Strong message behind
the words in this poem
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Ending it all
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by crucifixioncross on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 10:22:50 AM AEST
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| omg that is so sad and im really glad someone found her before it was too late. she really loved him but him loving her doesnt match he seems like a preppy ***** that i hate so much and that stuff like callin her ugly when before called her beautiful and the stupid smart one omg that was deep and made realize how hurtful people are and i really need to rethink my ideals and everything cause i have made fun of people and i dont really feel too good about it now....thanks for sharing the poem |
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Re: Ending it all
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by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on
Sunday, 8th December 2002 @ 04:53:38 AM AEST
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~very good poem
greatly written
very great to read it
thanks for sharing!~
~britteny~ |
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Re: Ending it all
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by Jacquelynne on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 03:00:10 PM AEST
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| This is a great and tragic poem...keep writing... |
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