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raised to be like this
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 04:21:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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is it fun to torment yourself
to always put yourself down
is it fun to torment others
to be negative all the time
the answers to these
their so clear and translucent
yet noone seems to see
noone understands
it's not about me
who torments myself
or me who talks down all the time
it's all about you
who made me this way
who raised me
within these walls
it was you who was
angry all the time
and took it out on me
now you tell me
to be like this
is only asking for pain
why couldn't you just
take the advise
that you are so willing to give
now after all the teachings
you gave
after all is said and done
you tell me you were wrong
i do not deny
i only wish
that i could of known before
because now i'm who i am
and i'm trying so hard to change
no wonder i have trouble
seeing right from wrong
look who gave birth to
my troubled soul
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Re: raised to be like this
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:59:15 AM AEST
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Purplestary, I can really relate to this poem. I was raised being taught right from wrong, but always seeing nothing but wrong.I was beaten unmercifully and slight infractions, and deprived of simple satisfactions because my parents were lovers of money.
I'm so glad to see you state in your poem, that you can change.......because change I did...never to repeat all the bad, only the good! Don't give up hope....if I can do it so can you.
I wish you good luck!
Poetic hugs for this poem......it was splendid!
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