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Never Again
Contributed by
CrimsonOrgazm
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 05:20:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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when i feel my heart beat when i hear myself breathe when i feel warmth running down my face thats when i know that im alone When i sit in my room when i stare at my ceiling When i feel nothing but gloom and yet its appealing thats when i know that im alone when i look through the pictures when i read my books when i inhale my beautiful toxins everyday thats when i know that im alone when i think of you when i want you to hurt when you haunt my in my dreams with your beautiful words thats when i know that im alone when i stare out my window when i laugh when it rains when i slice my skin and feel that strawberry orgasmn thats when i know that im alone when i feel your heart beat when i hear you breathe when i reach out to wipe the warmth running down your face when i wake up to realize that it was all a dream and then i feel my heart beat thats when i know that im alone
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Re: Never Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by XxNights_ChildxX on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:18:38 PM AEST (User
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absolutely magnificent, this poem is so gloomy, yet it deffinately points out the every day life struggles that you have to face. You are a great writer. |
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Re: Never Again
(User Rating: 1 ) by Starlilly on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 03:08:44 PM AEST (User
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the repitition is awesome and makes this poem really get into your heart ~
great writing! |
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