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Trinidad Morning
Contributed by
Ezekiel
on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 06:12:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Along the mangrove marsh and roots, In the morning sun and mist, He runs quickly. Escaping the shafts of heat, of light, Heading for the coolness of deeper shade.
Monkeys making cat calls, They cheer him on, and he smiles nervously.
The heavy handed wave of heat envelopes his soul As the end of this path only gives way to another. Tears and anguish find him in his distress; Hurling himself headlong into the darkest, deepest shade.
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Ezekiel
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2004-08-30 18:12:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Trinidad Morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jolly on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 07:30:00 PM AEST (User
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Forming beads of sweat on my brow, I ask a question I have had for a long time..what is a mangrove? I love the poem..very discriptive...I would gladly steal it for my book..were I a thief..lol. |
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Re: Trinidad Morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:00:51 PM AEST (User
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Very good write....nice imagery....
Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net!!!
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Re: Trinidad Morning
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:35:34 PM AEST (User
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vivid and beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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