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One More Thing
Contributed by
Savannah
on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm happy for you
Really, I am
Because you see
It's just one more thing
One more thing
I never had
One more experiance
I never knew
One more kiss
I never felt
One more dream
I never fulfilled
One more guy
I never got
Just one more thing
I never had
Copyright ©
Savannah
... [
2002-11-04 18:00:00]
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Re: One More Thing
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by OreO on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 10:09:50 PM AEST
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Such pain in a few
short words. Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: One More Thing
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by Haligh on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 11:41:17 AM AEST
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| i like the way you formatted this poem. it adds to the effect...good emotion in it also. |
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Re: One More Thing
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by Lia on
Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 01:56:54 AM AEST
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From great pain comes great joy...
My great grandmother told me once that there are plenty of fish in the sea...I hated that saying when I was younger because let's face it..a broken heart hurts like hell. But I am older now and I realize how right she was. Enjoy life as it comes and when love brings you to your knees, embrace it :) |
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