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World War II
Contributed by
longforgottenlove
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 09:36:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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Iron falling like hail,
Boys praying,
Some swearing.
No place to swear.
1:30, The zero hour
Baptism of fire,
My reception
Bullets flying like raindrops,
Shrapnel bursting,
Deadly iron
The destruction of man
All around you
Dead and wounded
Crying for the almighty
Pleading,
Eyes for death.
Day breaks.
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2004-08-30 21:36:40]
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Re: World War II
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by AspenGlow on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:24:00 PM AEST
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Yes I remember my Dad and I talking about it all....he was Navy.
Thanks for sharing.
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Re: World War II
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by TwEeK on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:59:57 AM AEST
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this brought the lump back in my chest when i finished reading, And in the Mourning, about a young man off to war. you can read my poem if you like.
wonderful play of imagry with only few spare words.
there needs to be more war poetry.
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