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Recovering Death
Contributed by
silverjade
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Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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spear of darkness
piercing me.
bleeding life
through my wound
i grab a cloth
to soak it up
but it slowly vanished.
iam free at last
i feel the freedom
i feel the release
of all that holded me down
now i can see
iam alive
i breath
slowly taking air inside
i breath
i cry
for i realize
iam alive,
one more time.
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silverjade
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2004-08-30 22:17:19]
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Re: Recovering Death
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 10:58:27 PM AEST
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sweet poem,i can relate,u should check out some of my stuff,not sure u'll like it but hey its worth a try right?
well later
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Re: Recovering Death
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:02:55 PM AEST
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They keep saying "what doesn't kill us will make us stronger". I think I am finally believing that. We just have trust in our own strength and viability. This is a great write.
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Re: Recovering Death
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 30th August 2004 @ 11:40:08 PM AEST
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Good poem. Reminds me of my bad car wreck 6 months ago. i have the wound i'll have the rest of my life but i'am thankful for being here and being able to respond to this poem nice..
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Re: Recovering Death
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:39:21 AM AEST
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