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Theres a cockroach in my pantry
Contributed by
veramouse
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 01:43:54 AM in AEST
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Theres a cockroach in my pantry
He always runs away
He hides beside the sugar tin
I see him every day.
He always makes me jump in fright
And I have named him Tim
That horrid little beastie hides
Beside the sugar tin.
One day when I was feeling brave
I laid a trap for him
I pretended that I wanted rice
And threw some salt on him.
Tim was way too smart for that
He saw my evil plan
He licked his wounds and scurried off
To the marmalade and jam.
The funny thing about him is
Hes hardly grown at all
I think hes on the Atkins diet
He is very, very small.
I wonder if he could be tamed
What kind of pet hed make
Im praying I dont find him in
The bread im going to bake.
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Re: Theres a cockroach in my pantry
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by cj_ranson on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 04:46:42 AM AEST
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That was awesome lol
well done
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Re: Theres a cockroach in my pantry
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by Bruce on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:02:45 AM AEST
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| very cute, made me laugh |
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Re: Theres a cockroach in my pantry
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by MomentInTime on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:17:07 AM AEST
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Good to see clever and well written poetry
thanx for the chuckle
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Re: Theres a cockroach in my pantry
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by inoc on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:01:19 AM AEST
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good one!
....[I was waiting for the ending and how he got squashed and the yucky smell....]
but the ending you wrote was so fine!!!!!!!
lol
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Re: Theres a cockroach in my pantry
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by Nazmythian on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 12:14:10 PM AEST
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Excellent poem, very entertaining.
( I'm not altogether familiar with Tim's kind - I am from the Seattle area and quite familiar with slugs, does salt work an a roach too ? Just a curiosity )
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Re: Theres a cockroach in my pantry
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by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:29:53 PM AEST
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Dear Veramouse............BRAVO!!! WELCOME TO THE YPDC SITE~ It's so nice to have you aboard!
I just found your poem delightful, and imaginative to say the least. I had a whole houseful of those little guys when I lived Illinois, but now I'm in Wyoming.....and hardly any bugs....it's just too darned cold....even for me at times! *smiles*
I had a mouse once in my electric stove, he was so cute I couldn't kill him......I think he welcomed the new owers somehow*smiles*
This was just darling
Lovingcritters (all kinds even bugs 'cause I'm alittle buggy myself *smiles*)
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Re: Theres a cockroach in my pantry
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by mecatpurrson on
Friday, 20th June 2008 @ 10:00:30 PM AEST
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| Very cute poem and well written. Shows you can see the humor in a not so nice situation. Good write! |
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