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Has This Dream Stopped?
Contributed by
mrmojorisin
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:39:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Moon casts his shadows
Night swallows the lands
Lizard flicks his tongue
Eyes shining brightly
Like stars in the dark
Breaking the barren void
The covers are warm
My pillow is deep
Join me tonight
In eternal sleep
Body rots in the grave
Once was someones son
Now a nestm of maggots
The true king is dead
No one to turn to
In the Valley of Tears
Come with me now Love
Closer, feel the warmth
Touch me one last time
Show me what fear means
Have you forgotten already
Dreams of our foolish mind
Visions of birth and death
Hopes to pierce the dark
But you're alone in the night
With lions, hungry, roaming.
Nightmares come true
You walk on water
Waving goodbye as
I drown in the bay.
This Dream has just begun
Copyright ©
mrmojorisin
... [
2004-08-31 10:39:23]
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Re: Has This Dream Stopped?
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:42:10 AM AEST
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wow, this was a great, dark write, I shall be looking out for more of your writes,
pixie xx |
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Re: Has This Dream Stopped?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:44:28 AM AEST
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| my dark heart is filled with pride at such a miraculious pice of work. Nicly done. |
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Re: Has This Dream Stopped?
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by clowns_can_burn on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 10:55:57 AM AEST
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| i really like this one. its real deep, nice write. |
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