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untitled
Contributed by
Budgurl162
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Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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How can this be?
Things like this dont happen to me!
You call me baby,
It melts my heart
Yet we are so far apart.
I long to see you,
Touch you,
Kiss you,
But these things are impossible
For we are thousands of miles apart!
It tears me to say
But these things are so far away...
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Budgurl162
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2002-11-04 22:30:00]
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Re: untitled
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by crucifixioncross on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:05:50 PM AEST
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ok budgirl, sorry i took so long to comment on it but anyways it was ok...it really could have been longer but hey thats why poetry is great, anything you do s ok since nothing is wrong i liked how you included alot of feeling to it and the rhyming timing was good so keep em up aight
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