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Finally happy
Contributed by
TiNyOnE
on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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please dont do this
dont do this to me
dont make me hurt
dont make me bleed
dont shut me down
for the first time in a while i was begining to be happy
i cant handle this pain its too hard for me
why dont you care
your not listening to me!
i need to talk, please take this hurt away
its too much to take
its too much pain
you want me to smile
to never be sad
as i smile inside all ive been feeling is bad
i cant stay this way, i cant continue on with this lie.
all i every wanted was to be loved now all i want is to die
i hate you the way you say you hate me
you tell me you just joke well im telling you im not happy
you dont care to listen nor to ask me how i am
if this is how you want it then this is how far it will stand.
you dont like the insults or the tears or pain.
how does it feel?
i stop caring when it all came.
i tried to tell you but you didnt listen to me
no point in calling 911 im finished, the blood is finally through coming out.
theres no point to begin to shout.
why why, now you ask?
its too late
im finally done I;ve completed my final task
this is it
the finallie,
im finally happy
Copyright ©
TiNyOnE
... [
2002-11-04 23:00:00]
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Re: Finally happy
(User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 05:19:41 AM AEST
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I'm sorry you felt like you could only be happy if you did this. But let me tell you, if you do, the world will lose another great person, great poet, in a time when it doesn't have that many to lose.
I really like your work and look forward to reading more from you.
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Re: Finally happy
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by Vampy on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 06:43:53 AM AEST
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| Wow, such deep emotion... I really did enjoy reading this. You did a wonderful job on this one... |
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