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Stone In The Rain
Contributed by
Rae
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Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:01:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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we'll all die soon yet
i can't seize this moment.
sitting in this naked soil,
i am left, alone and unrecognized.
there's no beauty in me, i know.
and i'm just a thing in this world.
but i'm waiting for someone..,
my imaginary hero who'll
call me his lovely maiden.
but a stone will remain a stone, so is
a fickle-minded person will
always change its mind.
i cannot show happiness nor sadness.
you only see my rage,
my miseries, and misfortunes.
but you're wrong...
you've always got me wrong.
the sun kills me in heat and abhor yet
i always seem to accept it always.
the rain drips hard and infinite on me yet
i always seem to bow my head and
listen to its wails...
i cannot take this wall any longer.
but a stone will always and only be
a stone.
-rae '02. 111202. Tuesday.
Copyright ©
Rae
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2004-08-31 17:01:58]
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Re: Stone In The Rain
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 05:38:14 PM AEST
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| amazing write and philosophy. much left to ponder after reading such a fantastic write. keep up the excellent work. |
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Re: Stone In The Rain
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 07:11:34 PM AEST
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interesting write, thanks for digging this one up... i always loved the smooth stones...
~Remy~ |
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Re: Stone In The Rain
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by chadbrown on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:18:30 PM AEST
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| Powerful and symbolic, I loved every line. Don't stop writting. |
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