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let go
Contributed by
TiNyOnE
on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Until the end
you said we'd be friends
from now till then
through thick and thin
how soon time past when you were having a blast
you warm at home as i was stuck lonely and cold.
i dont blame it all on you.
you moved on and grew
i remand within the memory of us.
remembering us playing in the sand, us skipping around holding hands
but thats things so far in history
its been so long i dont think you'd even reconigze me/
your living your life as im strive to revise mine
how did i end up so far
our friendship is like a distant star
i miss your calls that you use to send
you use to know how to give a helping hand
but those are things in the past
i dont remember being happy with out being with you the last
its hard to move on and try to grow
but from now on i will try and as you have done to me
i will try and let you go
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TiNyOnE
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2002-11-04 23:30:00]
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Re: let go
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:48:31 AM AEST
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This is so sad
Beautiful write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: let go
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:38:36 AM AEST
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| Great write. Good emotions shown too. I know exactly how you feel in the poem. Keep writing. |
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