|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
the prelude 2 the rest of mi life
Contributed by
Snapz
on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:46:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
|
the everything 'n' nothing
the prelude 2 the rest of mi life
all the decisions tht hang on a knife.
the thoughts an fears on everything near.
the stresses an strains the pains of thought,
these decisions are startin 2 make me distrort.
the nothingness is making me want you more,
for you are the one i adore.
the decision is you,and i have no idea wot 2 do.
sumtimes ur so stupid, tearin urself apart.
you cnt take ur h8red out in ur art,
u have problems 'n' dnt want me involved,
i understand an leave you alone.
i love u an u love me but itz like we r watchin the tv
itz playing out without a doubt, an i realy want out.
theres sumthing sorre btween us u say,
wel yes there is an i adore u
but i dnt want u 2do it no more.
this is the prelude 2 the rest of my life,
all the decisions tht hang on a knife.
..!!!YOU!!!..
Copyright ©
Snapz
... [
2004-08-31 18:46:29]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: the prelude 2 the rest of mi life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 06:54:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
a slight unintelligible, but you can't help but love the angst of the thing! great write!
~Remy~ |
|
|
Re: the prelude 2 the rest of mi life
(User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 01:03:02 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well you know i can be very stupid sometimes. I know it tears you apart as much as it does me physically. This is a good write though you can tell you were obviously drunk. I'm sorry and ive told you i would stop for you because i love you. Well thank you for writing this i needed something to open my eyes.
I love you ....... |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
