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Who am I
Contributed by
patch81
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Wednesday, 17th July 2002 @ 04:33:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If i die today,
Will i be remembered,
Or if i live for tomarrow,
Will it be a better day,
Things unexplainable proceed my heart,
Wondering if i can ever live again,
After the pain and the sorrow i feel,
Or can you just understand to see me a different way,
Everyone has there own dreams,
And everyone can follow any path in front of them,
But to take the one that makes you happy,
Is the hardest choice one can make,
So will the harps be calling my name,
Or shall i be shackled to another cell,
With these thought's running in my head,
Which one would i be willing to take,
If everything is always wrong or right,
With the choices we make,
How do we know the answer,
To all these problems we embark,
So i wonder who i really am,
Or who i could've been in my ponder,
But right now im not in drive,
But im just still in park,
So with the days of my life growing,
Making me older by the minute,
Having thoughts of life in the future,
Of who i really want to be,
Cause everday seems to be a struggle,
With life and all there problems,
I wonder just wonder to myself,
Who is really me.
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Re: Who am I
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by humphdj on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 08:44:32 AM AEST
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You put this well!...............I think finding yourself in life is probably the hardest thing to do.......................but it's well worth the struggle.
Good write
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Re: Who am I
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 21st July 2002 @ 02:40:23 PM AEST
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Hi...Dave is so right...finding yourself is probably the hardest task in life.... I enjoyed this...
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