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Darkness
Contributed by
RavenShadows
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 12:41:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My soul
Cold dark and hollow
Lonely
Bleeds from within
Cries out in silence
Pleas falling on uncaring ears
I take the knife
Pierce my flesh
Life force drains from my body
Punish myself
I'm not perfect not close
I am nothing not many but one
I cause only misery and disgust
Look down on me I see
I finally understand
This is something that I must now do
Blade in deeper
Blood flows darker red
I lay in my misery
I soon will be dead
You'll bury my body deep in the earth
Forget I existed I was just a bad dream
And now I am gone
You can have all that you want
Without me to stand in your way
I will lay in the earth
Cold and alone
Rotting in peace
Finally at rest
Copyright ©
RavenShadows
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2004-09-01 00:41:45]
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Re: Darkness
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by WildfireRose on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:17:26 AM AEST
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wow, that was really emotional, I hope it was just a poem and not actually what is going on in your life. If you need someone to talk to I am here for you. Good job though on the poem.
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Re: Darkness
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 05:46:03 AM AEST
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a greatly expressed dark write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Darkness
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by silverjade on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 06:53:38 PM AEST
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| this poem is awesome is very emotional, i liked it a lot |
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Re: Darkness
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by pickle on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 01:28:08 AM AEST
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| good write |
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