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Harvest Moon
Contributed by
WildfireRose
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 12:56:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Iridescent yellow rays of sunshine in the depths of night,
Reflected in the Harvest moon as it glides along the horizon,
The past on swift wings has taken to flight,
I look back as I fly on,
There is so much to live for,
That I scarce even gave thought to before,
You filled my heart as no one else could; for many tried but no one could win,
The you came charging in,
There could never be enough pages that could fill,
All that my heart holds for you; and there never will,
You are my laugher, my joy, my sunshine,
For no one else has a heart and soul like thine.
Copyright ©
WildfireRose
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2004-09-01 00:56:09]
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Re: Harvest Moon
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:11:20 AM AEST
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'I look back as I fly on,
There is so much to live for,
That I scarce even gave thought to before,'
- I liked those lines.
Your poem has a rich, deep-flowing feel to it.
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Re: Harvest Moon
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by whisper-of-night on
Saturday, 11th September 2004 @ 08:09:25 PM AEST
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| yea I agree with Tanmaya, this is a lovely poem, hehe I see you still have all those talents with ya! keep up the good work! I wanna see more!!^_^ |
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Re: Harvest Moon
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by rubytears on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 08:05:25 PM AEST
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| awesome poem keep it ^ |
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Re: Harvest Moon
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by Spike on
Friday, 30th June 2006 @ 05:41:19 AM AEST
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Sensational. Descriptive, expansive, subtle in some ways and oh so rich in feeling and expression. Lovely verse, smooth rhyming.
definitely from a lover's heart.
Spike |
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