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The Fire
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The hot open fire,warms our face,while watching the colorful flames,theres a share of embrace,
The warmth is touching our bodies & souls,
watching the flames till theres only coals,Laying beside the hot firey flames,and not saying a word,
and listening to the crackling is easily heard,
feeling the heat within,as our bodies are near,
a burning love,that we long to share,
we're both stareing for hours at this fire,
Knowing of each others burning desires,
The blue,the yellow,and the burning red,
appear in the flames,
and each movement from the fire is never the same,
watching it together as the flames become pictures in our mind,
Enjoying the heat of the passion,that slowly unwind.
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2002-11-05 01:40:00]
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Re: The Fire
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 01:50:49 AM AEST
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You show your love so
well through your writing
I enjoy reading this
Hope your hubby sees
how you feel for him
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: The Fire
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 02:13:21 AM AEST
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| Lovely! Nothing like a fire to "turn up the heat " a little huh...lol Great write! |
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Re: The Fire
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 06:34:36 AM AEST
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Lovely write, Christina
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