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LONELY BOY
Contributed by
Hakiokusaken
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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As he fell to his hands and knees
and slowly began to crawl
the boy on the floor cries and pleads
but i show no mercy at all
i beat him and stabbed him
with every intent to kill
released anger from within
until that boy layed still
on a mission to distroy
and set this child free
no one cried for that lonely boy
no one cried for me.............
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2004-09-01 01:30:00]
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Re: LONELY BOY
(User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:30:19 AM AEST
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| it's very sad, is the boy in this you and you were talking from your abusers side? it sounds abit like that, bt i' not too sure. thiswas a good poem, just a bit confusing. |
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Re: LONELY BOY
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by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:58:30 AM AEST
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beautiful write Hakiokusaken.
love always
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