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blind folded
Contributed by
Hakiokusaken
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:41:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
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as i walked around blind folded
lies to friends i have spoken
seemed alive but dead inside
that reflected image often made me cry
for every tear drop, there was a sin
when friends would ask me how ive been
id tell them "great never been better"
when all along i was under the wheather
violent storms and acid rain
all my sheets had a painful stain
i couldnt see and i hated to live
but all the tears and pain, i hid
until a friend saw past my strife
oh, dark one. just changed my life
i no longer fear to live so blind
my hand to his and his to mine
i was very weak but now im strong
here in hell is where i belong
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Hakiokusaken
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Re: blind folded
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:43:32 AM AEST
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Re: blind folded
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:58:37 AM AEST
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A symphony of inner thoughts and pain, very well written and let loose, images galore, filled my head as I read, emotions tore me back down to earth, as your poem progressed.
Beautifully written.
take care always
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Re: blind folded
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by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:49:57 AM AEST
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Great write, your poetry shows so much feeling. Thanks
Love always
corrupted_minds
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