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Disease
Contributed by
tabby
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:15:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My bloods turned to poison,
My life is slipping away
Held in the arms of my lover,
He wants me to stay.
But I have to go,
My time is gone,
Like sand through fingers,
Seeping til its gone.
The disease has taken me over,
Controls my body,
Its taking my life,
Theres nothing I can do.
The doctor says it wont be long.
And this will all be done.
What do I do? Do I turn and run?
He holds me in his arms,
And hugs me tight,
As if to preserve the life thats so precious,
And has nearly run out.
I feel safe in his arms,
I dont want to go,
But Gods got me by the hand,
Its time to leave.
I go to a place,
Where everythings warm,
I run on the beach,
I laugh til I cry.
There isnt any pain anymore.
Except for the hole in my heart,
It wont go away,
Til Im held in my lovers arms again.
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tabby
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Re: Disease
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 07:20:10 AM AEST
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very sad and dark write, very well expressed..
pixie xx |
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Re: Disease
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:50:46 AM AEST
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Riddled by sadness, entangled in darkness, vivid and emoitonal overload, and the imagary captured in this poem was overwhelming, awesome write, beautifully written.
Take care always
Kindragon |
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Re: Disease
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by TheDerangedCivilian on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 11:25:06 AM AEST
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| great poem...totally , like, awesome! just brilliant. maybe you should try to keep a certain sort of rhythm when u write. Otherwise it was gorgeous... |
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