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nothing more
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 08:17:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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nothing more,nothings left,an empty shell,my eternal hell,
a haunting gasp,my death at last,
die slow live fast,
too much to deal with in my past,
i fall,fast asleep,
murders in my brain creep
my soul is dead,i cry in my head,
someone save me from it all,
i still fall
on my knees i crawl in the dirt,
is life worth living if we dont hurt?
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2004-09-01 08:17:00]
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Re: nothing more
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:24:14 AM AEST
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Freaky and emotional write, had me on the edge of my seat lituarly, (sorry bad spelling)But all in all it was an excellent poem, keep em coming, it was well worth the read.
Take care always
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Re: nothing more
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by Willofree on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:54:14 AM AEST
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Powerful words and message. My thoughts while reading the poem were .... life is meaningful with or without pain .... and "on our knees..." is a good position for prayer.
I liked the poem,
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Re: nothing more
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by Flipped_out on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 09:58:07 AM AEST
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yes, what can I say, this made me feel well tingly, the 1812 overture does that to me and also fireworks. I really did like this a lot
You can have my children
Kell x
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