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You Are My Beautiful Cancer
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
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Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:33:18 PM in AEST
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These bitters tears roll off so sweet,
Why am I crying for you?
I did everything I knew to do,
But it still wasn't good enough.
You destroyed everything inside of me,
You are my beautiful cancer.
Eating at away at my kindness, my chivalry.
You spat it back in my face,
Forcing me to regurgitate at what I've become.
I loved you the best I knew how,
And you crushed me for it.
I am a shell of a ghost.
You drained so much of what I was,
I don't even know who the hell I am anymore.
Why is love so cruel?
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Re: You Are My Beautiful Cancer
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 01:34:27 PM AEST
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wow I really don't know what to say *hugs* apart from I am sorry, that was a very hard hitting and emotional write,
pixie xx |
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Re: You Are My Beautiful Cancer
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by brown_eyez_ on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:31:38 PM AEST
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| i really luved ur poem....it kinda hit me hard....and luv is cruel....it sux ass.... |
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Re: You Are My Beautiful Cancer
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by theMoth on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 04:52:29 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of probably the same thing that happened to me not long ago. (I wrote Love's Avenger and Billie right afterward.) I really get what you are saying here in your own words, bro. "You are my cancer". Everything in here is right on. "I am a shell of a ghost." "You spat it back in my face." You are a helluva writer. --Mothy |
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Re: You Are My Beautiful Cancer
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by rhyme_me_to_sleep on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:53:51 PM AEST
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Such a sad write, I hate how some people give us so much grief and for what.
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Re: You Are My Beautiful Cancer
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by artostuff on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 03:51:02 AM AEST
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| A very emotional write. Very good imagery. |
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Re: You Are My Beautiful Cancer
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by cuddlytiger17 on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:44:27 PM AEST
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| Love is so cruel because most people dont really care. They're great at acting as if they do, but deep down you're just another person to them. You're safest not ever really caring about anyone. It's a sad truth...=/ |
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Re: You Are My Beautiful Cancer
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 05:58:52 PM AEST
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I don't think most people are inherently cruel. I just think we
don't understand each other. It's a very sad fact. But with
lots of caring, love and hope, we can soar above our greatest
expectations.
Wonderful write Dane. This was outstanding!
And thanks for everything!!! Dude, you rock!
~Breezy |
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Re: You Are My Beautiful Cancer
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 21st November 2014 @ 01:25:01 PM AEST
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...Those last 6 lines...So emotively full, and utterly crushing. Painful and far too relatable.
That line about being a shell of a ghost...Sheer excellence, my friend!
You truly have a gift. Keep writing.
~Scorp |
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