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Internal Redemption
Contributed by
chadbrown
on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 03:40:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Transparent eyes see through a hollowed existence.
As love lies bleeding,
and empathy fades.
While youre eyes reflect the memories
of a shattered yesterday.
So now dream your last dream,
and let it die inside of me.
Copyright ©
chadbrown
... [
2004-09-01 15:40:29]
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Re: Internal Redemption
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by Fairy on
Wednesday, 1st September 2004 @ 06:20:15 PM AEST
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| sad, I can almost feel your disappointment |
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Re: Internal Redemption
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 02:29:20 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: Internal Redemption
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by Rae on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 11:25:19 AM AEST
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| words can't explain how i feel after reading this poem.. |
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Re: Internal Redemption
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by bonita2689 on
Friday, 22nd October 2004 @ 10:28:22 AM AEST
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| Lovely descriptions |
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Re: Internal Redemption
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by Taurusgem1 on
Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 08:23:32 PM AEST
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| Very good write. It was beautiful |
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